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Marco, I have some doubts on this suggestions of yours
“Recluta”, I don't find right now where it is in IGP but I remember I have seen it, I think "Esordiente" is closer to rookie (if you mean the person who make a debut) and better describes a first-year player in sports, "Esordienti" if you mean the category where rookies race (or more than one rookie).
I don't know if actually "rookie" could be understood by italian motorsport fans, I think yes, but I'd like to hear some other opinion, imho “Pro” and “Elite” is clear also for italians.

“Risp.” could generate confusion with other words? May be someone will fantasize about “Risposta pneumatici” and start thinking about a tyre response? Imho “Risparmio pneum.” e “Risparmio carbur.” is more clear, because we all know we are talking about cars and their parts.

I like “si rigenera”, it gives the idea of something that was lost and now is restoring.
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About the weather:

Current conditions = Condizioni attuali
"Alta" e "Bassa", talking about temperature I suggest "Massima" e "Minima" (imply temperature) that is most specialized.
Monday-Lunedì
Tuesday-Martedì
Wednesday-Mercoledì
Thursday-Giovedì
Friday-Venerdì
Saturday-Sabato
Sunday-Domenica (finally)

Portuguese (Brazil)
Laps >>> Voltas
Relevo no asfalto >>> Buracos no asfalto
níveis das asas estão execelentess >>> remove the last S
Resultados da prática >>> Resultados do treino livre
Nível de impulso padrão >>> I don´t know yet which is the best word to describe the push, but impulso is not OK. (maybe change for a question "Quanto o piloto deve forçar o carro?"
olhar >>> Assistir
Carros atualizado >>> Carros atualizados
Pesquisar >>> Pesquisa
Event >>> Evento
CHAVE >>> indicador (at research)
Academia da Juventude >>> Academia de Jovens, Treinamento de Jovens
Sedes >>> Sede
Rookie >>> Iniciante
Pro >>> Profissional
Elite >>> Elite (same word)
Taxa >>> Preço (at transfers)

Reading through this thread, I hope you didn't pay much for the "professional" translation :). Many times when using professionals that are not actually real professionals, they don't know the specifics of certain fields but still take the job and do it badly, real professional knows when he isn't up to par and either denies the job or spends some time learning the nuances (or will tell you who would be better suited for the translation). More often than not, someone well versed in both translated languages and the specific nuances of the field in question can do better job than someone with the qualifications of a translator but with no knowledge of specifics.

Check for 'international spanish' aka 'neutral spanish'. Will be easy for everyone, international spanish is well known all over the internet.
I'm sure you will turn 2 problems into just 1 ;)

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Here my small and humble contribution,
I hope I have been of help, Jack

Imo italian translator made a good job. To translate a list of terms out of context in a short time isn't as easy as it seems. I was involved (not as a translator, obviously) in a project of software translation and is not too easy to obtain a good result with a reasonable budget.

Here are some other (imho) imperfections:

My suggestion: Assumi piloti ed ingegneri, aumenta di livello e corri con i tuoi amici nel campionato del gioco multiplayer di motorsport manager.
“ed” instead of “e” because before vocals the conjunction “e” becomes “ed”.
“nel campionato nel gioco” doesn't sound well because there is a repetition (“nel”).
"motorspost" is obviously wrong


Attacco instead of Attaco.


“Se proviamo in condizioni atmosferiche simili alla gara, il nostro assetto sarà migliore.”
The driver “Corre” in the official race, but “Prova” in qualifying or tests.
“Tempo” in italian translate “time” and “weather”, your translation in italian sounds like “if we run in similar time to the race...”.
“Assetto” is singular masculine.


Mi piacerebbe usare una strategia con 2 pit stop. (conditional tense)



“Salario” for both, because all other occurrence of Salary in iGP were translated with Salario.


“Pole Position” is ok,
it's an english expression, it doesn't have the plural form in italian.
You also already use “pole position” in manager screen.


Migliora in curva a bassa e media velocità e su superfici irregolari o scivolose.
"at low to medium": "a bassa e media" is preferable because there is no other slot between low and medium, otherwise translation should be "da x a y", for example "at low to high" becomes "da bassa ad alta".


- “Riduce la distanza di frenutura richiesta negli angoli” is wrong,
Right: “Riduce la distanza di frenata in entrata di curva”
“in entrata di curva” better translates “when entering corners” of the english version.


“Talento”

I'm interested, send me the file.

In french, we say "Maniabilité" and not "Manipulation"
"La santé se régénère" and not "La santé régénère"
"Défense" and not "Défendre"
"Attaque" and not "Attaquer"
"Arrêt" or "Ravitaillement" and not "Arrêt ravitaillement"
"Résultats des essais-libres" and not "Résultats de la formation"
"Données de carburant pour la stratégie pourraient" and not "Données de carburant pour la stratégie pourrait"
"Pneus super tendres" and not "Pneus super doux"
"Pneus tendres" and not "Pneus souples"
"Pneus intermédiaires" and not "Pneus intermédiaires humides"
"Pneus pluies" and not "Pneus pleins et humides"
"Chances de dépassement" and not "Dépassement des chances"
"Bosselage de la route" and not "Cahots de la route"
"Données du circuit" and not "Données de circuit"
"Début de la course" and not "Début de course"

Oh ok thanks ^^

précises and not précis

Envoyés and not Envoyé
Depuis 1 jour and not 1 jour depuis

Petite liste and not Liste courte
There are many mistakes but I don't have the time to find all, sorry ^^

1) It's better to just show the number ^^
2) Yes ;-)